It is true that, nowadays, traffic congestion in most countries is on the increase and cities are becoming busier. In my viewpoint, governments should take some steps to tackle this problem because it affects most people especially who lives in big cities.
There are various reasons for traffic congestion. One of the main reasons for traffic jam is that majority of people prefer to use their own cars versus public transportation. Public transportation is not convenient enough and reliable to use in most mega cities. In addition buses and trains are too old and they don’t obey a punctual timetable. Another factor for traffic jam in mega cities is that commuters traveling to work at rush hours which is steady for most of workers.
One of the most important issues that administrations can do to mitigate traffic congestion is to make public transportation too efficient and affordable so more people will use it daily. Another measure to reduce traffic problem is to charge congestion fee for cars which enter city center. By taking this fee, either people will discourage to drive downtown, or authorities will be able to raise money in favor of public transportation. Moreover, attendance of some experts such as engineers, translators isn’t indispensable at workplace; they can work at home online via Internet. By decreasing presence of some workers at workplace or staggering their work hours, traffic jam will reduce. For example, Iranian government has decided to stagger working hours of employees to diminish traffic jam in Tehran, capital of country.
In these modern days congestion traffic has become one of the most serious matters. This issue can be alleviated by improving public transportation, changing workers’ attendance necessity at workplace and charging drivers who enter city center.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...eliable to use in most mega cities. In addition buses and trains are too old and they d...
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the workers') or simply say ''most workers''.
Suggestion: most of the workers; most workers
... work at rush hours which is steady for most of workers. One of the most important issues t...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s which is steady for most of workers. One of the most important issues that ad...
^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
... capital of country. In these modern days congestion traffic has become one of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, for example, in addition, such as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34827586207 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99476554836 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5874736477 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266023000991 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950105728019 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668217427489 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163830626856 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435476011373 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.