Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
Along with the proliferation of adventurous sports such as sky-diving or mountain climbing is the opposition of some people of prohibiting those sports due to their danger. From my point of view, although banning extreme sport activities is, to some extent, justifiable, I am of the opinion that the government should not restrict people's partaking in those games.
The first thing to notice is that those so-called dangerous sports are not as life-threatening as they are deemed to be. It is undoubted that there are several risks involved in every sport so if there are clear regulations and awareness, people can experience everything safely. For example, if amateurs aspire to go wave surfing, they will have to participate in additional training with professionals. Thus, they can be qualified and acquire certain skills for their safe playing. Moreover, state-of-the-art technology as well as a multitude of protective facilities can underpin people's lives. As a result, every sport can guarantee participants' well-being.
Another reason why I tend towards the continuing of extreme sports is that banning those sports can be an infringement of citizens' personal choices. As a matter of fact, everyone deserves their own decision about which activity they will engage in their past time. Provided that they acknowledge the risks as well as the rules, no one can curtail their playing. Furthermore, even if the restrictions are enforced, it is likely that the government cannot have powers on certain sports such as skiing or wave surfing. They seem to be out of authority and out of reach of the states.
In conclusion, while extreme sport activities can contain several threats, I am convinced that they should not be prohibited as participants can be equipped with effective training and equipment and they have their own rights to choose their playful activity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27333333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00254706689 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4333331129 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210763070756 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727392506006 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663994402715 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140679867772 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544087425616 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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