Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking?
It is true that individuals barely spend time on jogging. There are a number of reasons behind this tendency and several solutions should be adopted by themselves to improve the situation.
There are two primary reasons why people rarely walk. One reason is that most adults stumble into their dizzying pace of life by accident. They become busy with work, university, romance, children, buddies and Netflix. There is just not enough time. The most convenient and easy thing to sacrifice is time to exersice. For example, a study in America has shown that almost people usually work from 10 to 12 hours per day. It costs half a day of them so they use the time left for other activities rather than walking. Furthermore, advancements in technology have also made it harder for teenagers to exercise regularly. It is really straightforward to be addicted to smartphones, video games and social media today and thus these addicts can not find time to work out or they just can not get out of this circumstance.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would be health awareness education. Schools should raise awareness of students about negative effects on their health if they do not walking frenquently. Schools need to organize more sports competitions such as hiking or orienteering to encourage individuals do more exercise. More than that parents also need to help their children to form habits in sports even if parents can walking when they was young. It not only helps their health better but also tightens family bonds.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for people do not walking regularly, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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- Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking 73
- Many countries use fossil fuels such as coal or oil as the main sources of energy However in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged Do you think a positive or negative development 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00692041522 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6669200839 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615916955017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6736688498 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3888888889 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191611396733 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587144590057 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054453512132 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113562740844 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213502047571 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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