Films and games can be accessed by any time from mobile device like smart phone, tablets and laptop computers. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
nowadays, films and games has become significant part of every individual as well as primary medium of entertainment. it can be seen that films and games can comfortably get any time with the help of mobile device such as, smart phone, tablets, laptop computers. there are numerous advantages than the disadvantages.
To begin with advantages, there are number of factors of films and games which can bring a great deal of edification in the life of people. Firstly, people are able to minimize their stress after spending long time on work place, if they consume their free time while watching movies and playing games. Secondly, people also can learn plenty of information of latest and upcoming technology. For example, some films like a love story 2050 which illustrate the future of technology and how people will work with robots in 2050.
Moving further, there are other advantages of this development. in this sophisticated era people are familiar with their history of religious. this is possible because of films and games are constructed base on history such as, the history of world war 2 which showed by both categories. Apart from from this, films not only about past time, but also it provides a plenty of knowledge of culture which assist people to stay with their culture
However, although there are some disadvantages of this development, but it can be tackled by simple steps.first of all, if people spend number of hours on films and games, then their health can highly affected. people can surfure from deleterious illness like headache and weeksite. In addition to this, people can loss their concentrate from their life target as well as some people can be mislead by some films and games like , blue whale and other type of games.
In conclusion, undoubtedly, films and games play key role in leisure time. Therefore it has more advantages in comparison to disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03797468354 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69872295976 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553797468354 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1829960614 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8666666667 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310646983542 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10215662947 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101472698912 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183865873279 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107259851762 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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