In some countries, parents expect their children to spend long time studying both in and after school and have less free time. What are the positive and negative effects on children and society they live in?
In this modern society, education has become back bone of every individual. Therefore, it is beleived that children should consume leisure time and school time in their study.there are many positive and negetive impact of it for children and society which will be discussed further.
To begin with positive impact, first of all, due to high competition in this sophisticated era education has become more singnificant for children to become smarter as well as they can comfortably survive in society without any type of help if they have great deal of knowlegde. Apart from this, moe education can aslo assist them to get better future. this is because ,in future the demand of education will surge more than now in every field of work. Moreover, it can also bring a great deal of edification in society. For exmaple, if everyone is educated in society, then the chances of fight for any purpose in society will decrease because people are able to do coprate with all individuals with the help of education.
However, although it has positive impact for both children and society, but there are also some negetive impact of more education. Firstly, more than enough education also bring some deleterious illuness for health. For instance, if children spend much of their free time on education in or after school, then health of children can highly effected such as they can suffer from headache weak eye site while consuming plennty of time for education. consequently, they can not enjoy their chilhood with their friends which are necessary for children.
In conclusion, there is no doubt, education play phenomenal role in the life of chlidren. On the other hand it has both negetive and positive impact for children as well as society
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-03-31 | newwritter | 67 | view |
- Films and games can be accessed by any time from mobile device like smart phone, tablets and laptop computers. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ? 73
- Unemployment is a growing problem all over the world. What are the causes of this ? What could be done to help tackle this issue? 56
- An increase nunber of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages? 73
- In some countries, parents expect their children to spend long time studying both in and after school and have less free time. What are the positive and negative effects on children and society they live in? 67
- social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups . however,sharing personal information on social media website does have risks.do you think the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...nificant for children to become smarter as well as they can comfortably survive in...
^^
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... aslo assist them to get better future. this is because ,in future the demand of edu...
^^^^
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...em to get better future. this is because ,in future the demand of education will s...
^^
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...onsuming plennty of time for education. consequently, they can not enjoy their chilhood with...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01030927835 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59838811354 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2061789007 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6153846154 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248263203469 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903237475949 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101262682544 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173214961411 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836741184634 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.