Financial education should be a mandatory subject in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are a lot of mandatory units in a school curriculum, such as Mathematics, English, Science, and other common subjects. Financial education is a kind of literacy program that is not included in the conventional syllabus but should be compulsory as early as secondary school. I totally agree with this because we as individuals should be financially independent and are knowledgeable on how to handle are money responsibly. In this essay, I will discuss why it is important to include this subject on our curriculum.
Financial education is a broad subject; it teaches proper management of our income, how to prepare for our future, and how to choose the right investment based on our needs. Because of these, it is imperative that it is taught in our schools. First reason for this is that once we stopped receiving financial help from our parents or received our own salary, we tend to treat ourselves lavishly without thinking of how much we're spending or if we have anything left. One example is buying the latest cellphone that we can't afford even though the one we are using is still useable, which may put us in debt. Being financially literate could prevent us from doing such things. Second, if we are trained properly on this subject, we know how to properly budget our money. we may keep the 20% as emergency fund, 10% as tithe, 15% for bills, or any division of our wage accordingly. Third, we'll be properly informed of different investments that may help us in the future, namely healthcare, life plans, and educational plans for our children.
In conclusion, I believed that it is vital that we are educated on this subject as early as we were taught on subject like science. I further admit that it is more easier than science.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... is buying the latest cellphone that we cant afford even though the one we are using...
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Line 5, column 531, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...he latest cellphone that we cant afford even though the one we are using is still us...
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Line 5, column 770, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... know how to properly budget our money. we may keep the 20% as emergency fund, 10%...
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Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ike science. I further admit that it is more easier than science.
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Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it that it is more easier than science.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, third, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82781456954 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76576502332 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5201794229 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183977735436 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710937776331 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693212966645 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144869937079 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802202919145 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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