Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, the quetstion of tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents for cultural and historical attractions has sparked a controversy. Although this suggestion appears reasonable, the disadvantages will be far more significant.
There are a number of reasons why high cost should not be imposed on local residents. First, since the decreased cost of visit places such as monuments or museums for foreign tourists will create an unfairness towards citizens. In fact, they may feel angry or irritated if knowing that their taxes are not spent on their benefits. Second, by charging an extra fee, the owners of cultural and historical attractions can take advantage of the money to improve the quality of services such as brochures and tourist guides. This means that overseas visitors may feel more satisfied.
On the other hand, this can do more harm than good. First, by spending on wide range of goods and services, including food; souvenirs and accommodation, foreign visitors have contributed to the economy of the host country. The governments and inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidise important tourist sites. Second, if travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit historical and cultural attractions in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to that country on holiday. This means that they would feel disrespectful and share negative comments for their relatives or friends, which make these countries suffer from an considerable decrease in its economy.
In conclusion, every effort should be made to attract tourists from overseas, and it would be counterproductive to make them pay more than local residents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 668, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... which make these countries suffer from an considerable decrease in its economy. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31851851852 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90686713546 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3982492715 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284888948303 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995933329035 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667929245586 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182579530126 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293043979039 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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