Fossil fuels (e.g. coal, oil and natural gas) are the main resource of energy in many countries. However, in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy (e.g. wind power and solar power) is encouraged). To what extent is this a positive or negative development?
there is little room for doubt that fossil fuels are considered a major energy in many countries in the world. however, some countries have taken action for development and use renewable sources like wind, solar and water to gradually replace fossil fuels in the future. And it is a completely positive development.
On the one hand, no one can deny that fossil fuels play an important role in industry because they can be used as fuel to generate energy. however, fossil fuels are non-renewable resources because the Earth takes millions of years to create them and consumption is happening faster than the rate at which it is made. In addition, burning fossil fuels creates other air pollutants and affects the environment negative. For these reasons, many nations are aiming to use renewable energy sources as one of the ways to help solving the problem of increasing energy demand.
On the other hand, there are more advantages when countries look to use renewable energy sources because of many choices and it can minimize the cost of some rare types of energy. This will help a number of low-income developing countries to select the appropriate energy sources. For example: The tropical monsoon climate is very suitable for developing wind and solar energy in Vietnam. these two healthy energy sources are renewable and do not pollute the environment.
In conclusion, the use of alternative energy is an amazing development for mankind in the context of fossil fuel development for mankind in the context of fossil fuel resources are gradually exhausted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10116731518 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69592247691 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517509727626 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0964851207 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321309484124 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12378162408 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051388962796 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214068089813 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047175835058 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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