Some people dislike changes in their society and in their own lives, and want things to stay the same. Why do some people want things to stay the same? Why should change be regarded as something positive?
Nowadays, there are a lot of people, who prefer to keep staying things the same. In This essay, I am going to explain the reasons for refusing everything new as well as explore the positives of embracing change.
There is one part of society that likes to do things in a particular manner. This approach gives them a sense of stability. In other words, they keep their routines unchanged to avoid risks and vulnerability. This behaviour can be caused by negative experiences in the past. For instance, some people, who are allergic to new cuisine or are poisoning, may avoid experiments with new food in the future. Also, some of these people prefer to lead a simple life and This lifestyle allows them to maintain a peaceful mind because they do not experience much fluctuations.
These days, society and the environment are developing increasingly fast. This progress improves all areas of our life, including our connections with other individuals, working processes and our interactions with the environment. A typical example is the advent of digital technology. Rapid growth in the IT sector positively changes our existence. If we had not gotten acceleration in this area, we would not have many modern services, Such as food delivery, internet shops, remote work and the opportunity to study from any spot on the Earth. That is to say, changes only in one field of human activity might bring a lot of benefits.
To conclude, avoiding changes has many reasons. For one it can be escaping vulnerabilities, for other it is the possibility of keeping peace. However, contemporary developments make our lives easier and increase our standards of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ful mind because they do not experience much fluctuations. These days, society an...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... of digital technology. Rapid growth in the IT sector positively changes our existence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05818181818 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92943793441 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1715888552 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8235294118 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156331795389 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04720688086 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047360543839 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875496541296 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356091967514 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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