The worldwide population of children aged 15 and younger is rising. What are the current and future advantages and disadvantages for countries with this kind of growth?
In recent years it is noticed that the population of children has increased all over the world. Therefore, countries take benefit from this change. However, this change has some dark side which effects after a few decades.
On the one hand, there are a lot of o advantages to the younger generation. The youngsters are always a part of the country’s economy and they play a vital role in their incline by their contributions. For example, 65 per cent of Pakistan's population are young people where age are not more than 25 years that's why in a few years Pakistan's economy grow continuously. In addition, the adults have accepted changes very quickly because they are on their learning faces. Thus, nowadays, children interested in science and technology subjects rather than art subjects.
On the other hand, those countries face more problems after a few years where the whole generation getting old at the same time. The authorities will have to spend money on their look after. For instance, according to the report of the BBC. The Thailand major population are base on elder citizens where minimum age is 40 years, therefore the 20 per cent of their budget they have spent on those people and give other facilities. Moreover, at the same time, a generation retires from their jobs. Therefore, countries also face economic crises.
To summarize, young adults creates a lot of thing for this world and contribute to their country's economic development. Whereas, when they turn into old citizens of the country than the authorities should be able to help them and that is a big problem for the governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96691176471 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6711298322 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0609676541 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4375 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156059931191 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517432679294 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351303209821 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101117840572 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222854953782 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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