In the future, it is expected that the proportion of the older people is higher than the younger people in many countries.
Is it a possitive or negative development?
Some hold the belief that in the future time, the percentage of the elderly people will increase much more than that of the younger generation. This essay will discuss the beneficial and detrimental effects of this development.
On the first side, rising the proportion of the older people has its possitive effect. The best example is that the elderly obviously have lived longer than the younger one, therefore, they may have more precious experiences from their lives, and they can teach their young children many things in life. Consequently, the younger can acquire a lot of things from their parents or their grandparents to manage things in their lives.
On the flip side, there are some disadvantageous effects of this development. One of those is that if the percentage of the older grows, that will not be good. A good interpretation is that the young people have their own health to afford many things in life. From that point, the employment source in their countries may enhance and go up because of those creative and healthy young employees, whereas the older cannot do the same things to develop their nations.
In conclusion, this development brings both benefits and hindrances. Because the older people have their own mental experiences while the young generation have their health and creative mind to do many labour work and create a lot of things.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02183406114 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64722481876 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510917030568 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0245444098 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.545454545 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190874962968 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820103437928 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754604294163 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122402268046 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164343383418 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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