In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?
It is generally believed that the proportion of elderly people will increase to high levels in some countries. While I can see some benefit from this, I believe this phenomenon has negative effects on society.
On the one hand, it is clear that the high proportion of senior citizens would have some positive effects. The most significant advantage is that the increase in the number of elderly people will contribute free labor to ameliorating communities. Actually, older people often have selfless hearts and have savings at the same time. They donate to charities. Besides, it's common to see charity organization heads being elderly people. In addition, the elderly will be a valuable source of life experience for their children and grandchildren to learn from.
On the other hand, the most obvious negative affects of this high older people is that the growing aging population will pressure younger generations. The truth is that today, on average, a young person has to take care of up to two elderly people. This problem leads young people to shoulder much more responsibility. Additionally, the high rate of elderly people strains the government budget. This is because many elderly people will be affected by the government pension policy every year.
In short, an aging population affects many countries, both developed and developing. This puts pressure not only on the young generation but also on the government budget.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, if, so, while, as to, in addition, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23275862069 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77333092996 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577586206897 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1549606265 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7142857143 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306187679766 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939766781134 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626834495273 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176292197348 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679437175658 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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