In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online whitout paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
By growing the technology, it is possible that all newspapers and books convert to eBooks and online news. In my opinion, in the future people have more tendency to read eBooks and news online.
On the one side, technology help people don’t pay extra money for buying books and newspapers. They can use social medias applications to know every press and have accessibility to every kind of news about different subjects. Not only can people access to numerous publishers but also they would be able to access every moment news which in printed version it is daily and you should pay to provide. Whereas, online news can support the large range of news in minimum time and it is impossible in its paper version.
On the other side, increasing online news and eBooks need less timbers for providing paper. This has a good effect on environment which trees can be alive in addition by this atmosphere get cleaner by producing more Oxygen. Annually, cut lots of trees because of providing papers for publishers and leads to deforestation and destroyed many habitants of different species. Besides, the cost of this operates is very high and because of this the price of books and newspapers are high. Growing technology affect on this section a lot and solve the financial and environmental aspects.
In conclusion, in the near future by eliminating printed newspaper version people can use social medias and technology to know about presses besides similarly about books and other papers based publish.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun timbers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, similarly, so, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00398406375 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62443678714 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8044827731 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18171614489 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661629252124 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039301962246 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104067303701 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201336591631 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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