In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that the printed newspaper or books will not be existed instead of reading online without paying will be chosen to use. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the aforementioned statement.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people prefer reading e-books or newspapers online than reading newspapers or books. The main reason is that online books or newspapers become more convenient and more easily to use. People can access any news or e-books they want if their electronic devices connect the internet. Moreover, people can keep up to date fastly and exactly than the day before. It is usually due to up the news continuously and regularly.
On the other hand, I strongly disagree that the printed newspapers or books are not used in the future and using online books ore newspapers without paying. Firstly, newspapers or books are play an indispensable role in the life. There are a large number of elderly people using newspapers on the daily basic. Additionally, there are lots of e-books require payment to read because the money, which paid to read, is the income of the author. To illustrate, on the apple books people have to pay 29.99 USD to read Harry Potter.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree that the traditional books or newspapers will not be used in the future because of reading e-books or online newspapers without paying.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Some people believe that the printed newspaper or books will not be existed i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...the other hand, I strongly disagree that the printed newspapers or books are not ...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...dispensable role in the life. There are a large number of elderly people using newspapers on the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97413793103 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63808597697 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504310344828 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0841760383 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7692307692 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355148397872 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127806956919 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109510800031 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270263898976 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948938287633 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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