In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In this day and age, many people believe that it is extremely indispensable to have a own house. Because home plays an important role in their life. In my opinion, I am of that there is more negative than the positive of this view.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people should buy a house. The main reason is that a house is very important with people, which they escape from the hectic day. It is also a place for people meet their family after a day. To illustrate, a report of survey shows that there are nearly 80% people selected coming home than hanging out after a day. Moreover, if people have their house, they will pay more attention to career path. It is usually due to do not worry about where they will go after finishing their work.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that the drawback is overweight the benefit. Buying a house will pressure to people because the cost is exorbitant. For example, a condominium in Ha Noi has price about 2 billions VND, while the lower class just earn more than 10 millions VND per month, they also expend for many bills such as water bill and electric bill. Moreover, renting a house will flexible and economical for people. The cost renting a house is almost cheap because it depend on what kind of home they rent. And they can usually move to new areas to work or live in a short time.
In conclusion, while there are some advantages of having a own house, I think that it is more disadvantages for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44688644689 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31548193994 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4184252014 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.875 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233466417447 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736673145406 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514677300664 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150030110809 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585460609408 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.