In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the modern world, the issue of payment for things has become very important. In this regard, some individuals believe that money spent for books and newspapers are pointless and instead they should use internet for reading purposes. I agree with this statement, as electronic book does not require space for storing and safe person’s time.
Nowadays, it has become a problem for people to create a book, as environmental sources, in this case trees, which are used for their generating are limited. Consequently, process of their creating has many difficulties and their price is increasing. For this reason people prefer to use their electronic replacement as they can be stored easily on various devices such as computer or mobile phone. this alternative can be used by older generation, as they can read news by just searching them online and simultaneously safe their time as they do not need to wait for newspaper. Also they might be useful for students, because they do not need to care heavy bags with books and instead use tablet for studying purposes. All these factors convince to increase popularity of online reading.
However, for some individuals reading printed book is more preferable and they will never replace it, because, comparing it to electronic one, printed books have not negative influence on eyes. But this problem is already solved by creating special glasses which protect eyes from straining.
In conclusion, online reading is starting to gain popularity and in nearest future might completely replace printed books and newspapers.
- Currently there is a trend toward the use of the alternative forms of medicine However at best these methods are Ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous To what extent do you agree with this statement 61
- The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement 81
- WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fe 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...vices such as computer or mobile phone. this alternative can be used by older genera...
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Line 2, column 580, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...they do not need to wait for newspaper. Also they might be useful for students, beca...
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Line 2, column 748, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: increasing
...ng purposes. All these factors convince to increase popularity of online reading. However...
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Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the nearest'.
Suggestion: in the nearest
...ding is starting to gain popularity and in nearest future might completely replace printed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21343873518 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72133741506 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.317387988 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.916666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258353319608 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946780685402 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068462275788 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159098450551 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016013969636 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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