In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With the development of technology, there are many ways that people can choose to read. It has become increasingly prevalent for individuals to engage in reading either through digital platforms or traditional paper-based mediums. While some people prefer to read printed newspapers or books, I firmly believe that an escalating number of individuals are gravitating towards online reading as opposed to purchasing printed materials.
There are three reasons why fewer and fewer people purchase printed newspapers or books. Firstly, the high cost of printed books means that only a select few can afford them, which means that do not have the opportunity to learn more knowledge. For example, in the ancient time, only the nobility could read printed books because it is so expensive that poor people cannot buy. Secondly, it is inconvenient for people to carry the printed newspapers or books when they go outside or travel. Some masterworks are so heavy that people cannot carry out and just read it at a single, fixed location, which is limited the chance of people exchange their opinion. Thirdly, printed newspapers or books can exacerbate environmental issues. This is because many printed material use wood and water to make it, which means that the tree will be cut and use lots of water, thereby increasing pollution problems and damaging our environment.
I believe that more and more people will choose to read online. It is clear a plethora of books and news articles are available for free online, which means that everyone has the chance to get more knowledge and change their life, thereby making our society fairer. Meanwhile, reading online offers unparalleled. We can use mobile phone to read all the thing we want in at all times and in all places, which means that we can share our opinion with our friends or other people. It can improve the information communication. Moreover, e-books or online news is more environmental-friendly. This is because digital newspapers or books make from plastic, steel and other materials but not wood, which means that fewer trees will cut in the future, thereby protecting our environment.
In conclusion, I think more and more people choose to read online instead of buying printed newspapers or books in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... poor people cannot buy. Secondly, it is inconvenient for people to carry the pri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12332439678 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79932048643 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504021447721 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.516150787 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227123329102 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792776443655 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453285862943 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149024577572 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292682116829 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.