Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
currently, most governments spend a large part of their budget not only on public services but also the arts. Although it is necessary to channel the proportion of government money to words in this sector, most should be spent on public services.
It is important that the government spends a significant of its budget on public services.
Because these are our hospitals, roads, and schools, and they determine quality of life.
Taking the UK as an example, the government has recently reduced public spending on health
and education, resulting in increased waiting lists for hospital treatments and fewer
teachers, both of which will have further adverse effects in the future. this demonstrates
The importance of ensuring that a large proportion of government money is spending on
public services as it is the only way to maintain standards and accessibility for everyone.
However, this does not mean that art should be neglected. Firstly, it is difficult for
many arts institutions to generate much profit because people are not prepared to pay high entrance fees for places such as art galleries or theatres, so without some help from the government, such places may have to close. Also, the arts have an important impact on our quality of life, with many people getting great pleasure in going to see music and theatre performances. not only this, the performing arts and literary arts such as dance and books help to keep our culture and history alive for future generations.
To conclude, although most of the government spending should be directed to words public services, spending money on the arts is not a waste and should continue. A balance
Is required to ensure public services are maintained whilst the arts remain available to all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14532871972 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74366318039 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543252595156 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.380046373 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26972426097 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105147758078 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546609410231 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945407032033 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581536034828 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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