The habit of people overconsuming things like food, buying too many clothes and travelling and spending too much must be lowered down by people, otherwise society will be unsustainable, having a very less number of resources and planet will suffer.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
Undeniably, most people consume more and more whether it is spending too much money and time for travelling or hoarding clothes, or buying a lot of home appliances and so forth. By witnessing this incessant incline in the consumption, it is suggested by many that people must lower their consuming habits to save the planet, to make society sustainable and to save planet's crucial resources. In my opinion, I completely agree with this idea due to the following reasons.
Firstly, it is needless to say that for saving the planet, one should exhaust various resources in limit; otherwise all the resources will get diminished soon due to this trend of over-consuming everything. Since there is a dramatic population explosion since last one century, it is already very difficult for governments of many nations to fulfill the many basic needs of the people. For example, When people travel voraciously then they use more and transportation which increases the pollution. Similarly, when people do spend exorbitantly for shopping, they end up collecting many clothes which they might not even wear or throw later. For making these clothes, a lot of resources like water, electricity and water are used in factories and these natural resources are already in dearth. What is more, it would be imprudent to ignore the fact that people eating too much food leads to get many health problems like obesity, food poisoning and so on. Even, people in the greed of eating excessively waste food which could have been eaten by somebody suffering from the starvation. Therefore, the habit of consuming in an uncontrolled manner can disrupt the sustainability of human society and hamper the growth of planet.
In contrast, some people might think that advancements in technology and science have made it possible now to fulfill any increasing demand of the world whether it is of food or of clothes, of products like home appliances or even. To illustrate, improvements in fertilizers and crop systems have given us manifold yields of the crops schemes like Green Revolution. Adding up, alternative ecofriendly resources to generate electricity like cng, wind power and many others are with us now to save environment and fasten up the process of manufacturing to meet the increasing demands of the people and industries. Therefore, one can over consume and still earth, its resources and human society can sustain.
In conclusion, it is clear that people around the world should definitely decrease their over consumption of various things to make the word better place to live and to make it survive even in future because excess of everything is bad.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1121, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an uncontrolled manner" with adverb for "uncontrolled"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tion. Therefore, the habit of consuming in an uncontrolled manner can disrupt the sustainability of human...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11520737327 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84589356716 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55069124424 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6072071377 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305500582141 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845638654519 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512059215025 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156329071017 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824091835286 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1121, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an uncontrolled manner" with adverb for "uncontrolled"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tion. Therefore, the habit of consuming in an uncontrolled manner can disrupt the sustainability of human...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11520737327 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84589356716 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55069124424 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6072071377 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305500582141 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845638654519 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512059215025 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156329071017 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824091835286 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.