Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
People seek happiness for its crucial role in our life. However, not everyone can understand the accurate definition and criterion that affect the sense of joy. This essay will shed light on the statement above.
To begin with, it is difficult to describe the term ‘’happiness’’ because people have different viewpoints towards it. Nobody can fully understand other people’s feelings and each of us has our particular ambitions. For instance, some individuals feel satisfied while helping those in need, whereas others find joy when getting job promotions. At the same time, the sense of tranquility may appeal to some people but it cannot apply to others.
To fulfill happiness, it seems that most people have to be close to their families and friends, who can sympathize and understand them. Indeed, sharing ups and downs with people we love is the most efficient way to relieve stress and feel peaceful. Also, achieving basic needs like shelter, food, and a job plays a crucial part in gaining happiness. Those things, which are the foundation of life satisfactory deter us from homeless, jobless, and famine situations. According to a survey in the USA, citizens without a home and sufficient food are more prone to depression, and hardly any of them experience a pleasure.
In conclusion, there is nothing more important than happiness. Albeit sharing different meanings about being happy, people may have to achieve the same goals to accomplish it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22784810127 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86197900397 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683544303797 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0042220713 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954711942146 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335858212531 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048680071731 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614243188439 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243464634379 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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