Happiness has many different meanings for different people. In my opinion, there are two factors to decide happiness, and they are physical and mental factor.
As we know, different people have different levels of need. These unsatisfied needs stimulate an individual to act in order to satisfy them. Once the needs of a specific level are satisfied, an individual starts aspiring to move on to the next level of needs. Therefore, we can say that happiness is a by-product of satisfaction. Since people perceive happiness differently; they fid it difficult to quantify happiness. For example, a highly affluent person may not be content with what they have; on the contrary, a poor person can be happy while struggling for a day’s meal.
There are various determiners of happiness. The first and foremost is the feeling of content. A person who always feels positive will happier than the one who thinks negatively. The second factor is the physical need. For instance, having good health will help us fully enjoy our life and make us love our life more. Also, having a family who always care and love us will make people happy.
In conclusion, there are various meanings of happiness for each purpose. Physical and mental are two foremost factors to determine happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Happiness has many different meanings for different people. In my op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04716981132 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71611293781 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5632267353 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.875 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170184940884 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601784784632 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05579691065 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120324944715 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549578574039 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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