Good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work, Discuss both and give your own opinion
Due to the advanced urban cities, education institutes and healthcare systems are deemed to be more upgrade in this place. It is accommodating for professional workers such as doctors or teachers who will be holding their job down in metropolitan cities. Meanwhile, others proposed that novices in healthcare industries or education fields need to spend a few years in working rural areas. Nevertheless, based on human rights, they should actually be free to place where they want to work. From my perspective, to encourage many people in both working locations, the government is needed to vital role involved in this matter.
Apparently, the outskirt of the city is less likely to appeal to intellectual employees locating in this place. It is shown that an individual to become a doctor must at least 6 years endured, after graduating from their school, a high salary is comparatively attractive they're desirable in this position. Some people have highly believed that of obtaining up to their career ladder, the center city is more option than ever had. Owing to the fact that a lack of facilities in healthcare systems or school that do not expect in one’s own nature in the outside of the city.
On the other hand, we live in a democratic country where almost all basic human rights putting into the first status. Thus, enforcing in such place may result in working that do not motivate in their enthusiasm. Furthermore, not anyone might be appropriate to treat or convey their knowledge to others. As can be noticed that it is hard to pursuit choosing such majors and careers to those who are living in urban cities. From this, the shortage of professional personnel would not be provided in both places in the long run.
In conclusion, sending others to rural areas would be an ideal situation, nevertheless, the government should invest more financial in there. In addition, respecting one’s rights are not obligate any else who will work other spots
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, first, furthermore, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, at least, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98480243161 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77334595531 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3055546027 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251982699716 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729332903366 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508732559027 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142719922704 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578571369307 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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