I NTERNATIONAL sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
: It is undeniable that international sports events bring name and fame for a country but on the other hand, organizing such events is a challenging task as it also requires huge amount of money. I do believe that such events are expensive; however, the host country is benefitted in certain ways as well. This essay intends to explain my viewpoint before reaching the conclusion in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, hosting sports events proves beneficial for the country by improvement in infrastructure and by raising the life standard of the locals. To be precise, while the organization of multinational sports programs ,the arrangements of high quality stadiums ,smooth roads for better transportation and staying of players along with the international audience have to be made which is later enjoyed by the local people only . To exemplify, Fifa Cup is mostly hosted by European nations which is one of the major reasons of well-established roads, proper lighting system in these nations. In another worth mentioning advantage of sports events is boost in national economy. In other words, arrival of international spectator assists the organizing country in revenue generation due to their spending on food, stay and shopping .Thus, owing to such advantages the hosting of international sports events can be considered in favor of the hosting nation.
On the other hand, organizing these events also has some drawbacks. At the onset, such events demand a huge amount of money which becomes difficult for a hosting country to arrange. The money that is spent on international sport events can be used for providing basic needs to native people. Furthermore, hosting multinational sports programs is also dangerous in regard to the environment point as it enhances pollution in the surrounding. For instance, a large number of vehicles are used by international players along with spectators that becomes a sole reason for enhancing air pollution .Throwing garbage anywhere, spitting on the roads also increases the worries of local people. Thusly, such events also bring problems with it.
To conclude, I opine that if these events would be organized properly then they would not only become a source of income for hosting country but also increases the standard of living of its natives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in my view, in other words, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25135135135 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95369684742 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52972972973 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0074800442 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.533333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222428431815 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919348827722 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600524983542 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14853033545 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414967465527 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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