The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think, and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
The generation gap has long been a source of contention in modern society. Some people may adhere to old ideals, while others believe that such ideas are inappropriate for young people in modern life. In my opinion, some values are out of date and should be revised, while others should be accepted today.
However, I believe that young people should inherit some of the valuable values of past generations. There is a notion that age speaks with the wisdom of experience; their life experiences, together with cherished characteristics such as hard work, doing one's best, taking pride in one's work, and respect for others, should be taken into account.
It is not denied that some conventional beliefs were correct in the past but are no longer correct in the present. For example, in the past, children were expected to accomplish things the way their parents wanted them to. However, the concept of good children has changed, children can now express themselves more freely and openly. Another positive development occurs in the roles of men and women in the family. Previously, women were supposed to stay at home and handle housework, while males were expected to be breadwinners with complete decision-making authority. Nonetheless, men and women share equal responsibility for housework, producing a living, and making crucial decisions now.
In conclusion, young people should be open to new things from the outside world yet inherit strong conventional values. That is one way to help the next generation develop in a civilized manner while also conserving good traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81627351022 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.778228325 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181401482791 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629237676651 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696142528099 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119092278127 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769679772742 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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