In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Childhood obesity has become a common indicator of poor public health around the world, particularly in Western-based countries where huge amounts of unhealthy food are consumed on a daily basis. Some people feel that governments should do whatever is necessary to remedy the situation. However, we should not hold governments solely accountable for solving the childhood obesity issue.
The role of a competent and accountable government is to safeguard the well-being of its citizens. That is to say, if there is a severe threat to the people, such as a dangerous epidemic, the government should be the first to recognize it, propagate it, and put measures in place. And parents are responsible for childhood obesity. Because they are the ones that spend the most time with their children.
The child's diet should be balanced and acceptable, include a variety of foods, and avoid eating one type of food in particular. Food processing also requires attention, such as limiting fried and stir-fried foods and instead of preparing boiled, steamed, and braised dishes. Chew carefully and eat slowly, eat regularly, don't miss meals, and don't allow youngsters to get too hungry, because when they're hungry, they eat more at the next meal, causing fat to accumulate faster. Eat more at breakfast to avoid snacking at school, and eat less in the afternoon and evening. Consume more green veggies and fewer sugary fruits. Reducing the use of rice and replacing it with potatoes, and corn is a fiber-rich staple meal. Furthermore, parents must be more severe with obese children rather than quickly softening with them. Limit your consumption of candies, carbonated soft drinks, condensed milk, and ice cream. Do not keep them in the house at all. Diet and exercise, in particular, must go hand in hand. Parents must cultivate their children's favorite athletic activities. Focusing on children's interests in simple and practical activities such as walking to school, running, jumping rope, kicking a soccer ball, playing badminton, shuttlecock, climbing stairs, and so on. Encourage children to complete household activities such as cleaning, carrying water to water plants, moving furniture, and so on.
In general, children are a reflection of their parents. Even though we love and mollycoddle them, this makes all efforts pointless. Unknowingly, we are causing our children to become obese and unhealthy. The government and the Ministry of Health only aid parents in part. The rest is up to parents to ensure their children have a healthy life and a great future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ngsters to get too hungry, because when theyre hungry, they eat more at the next meal,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, in general, in particular, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2427184466 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78956470127 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604368932039 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7666996976 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.48 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156353228954 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041762051849 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470769849727 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108022148837 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549922564216 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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