If old people are no longer physically, mentally or financially able to look after themselves, younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era, the responsibility of younger people in taking care of their elderly family members is a topic of interest and concern. Personally, I support the view that the young people should be accountable for supporting their aging individuals who are physically, mentally or financially incapable.
The primary reason for my belief is that the younger people have a duty to take reasonable care for their parents in most Asian countries due to their long-standing customs of moral norms. In fact, not only family relationship has been built from loving, caring and mutual supporting, it is also fostered by legal obligations of family members according to legal systems of governments in many countries. For example, nowadays, the punishment on irresponsibility behaviors toward caring parents has been strictly enforced by Vietnamese legal regulation. In other words, on no account do youngsters not fulfill the responsibility of taking care of their aging parents, who have devoted a lot of time and resources to raising them. Moreover, the lack of filial piety could also affect the national economy because the government might have to spend more subsidies for the elderly. In addition, although looking after old family members could be considered as the responsibility of most young people, its degree also depends on the economic, health and work-life schedule conditions of younger members. Therefore, ensuring the quality of private life as well as looking after aging parents are things that young people should learn to balance.
The second reason for my viewpoint is that only when elderly family members have been taken great care from their offsprings would they receive the greater practical merits and love than anyone else. This is because the younger family members, especially those in adulthood, often have the stable health and facility, which might make them willing to provide great life conditions for their parents with sincere hearts besides their private lives. Indeed, nursing home or not-for-profit care services might have a certain limit because they have to take care of many old-aged people with many other expenses, not to mention they also have their own lives and their parents. Thus, this option might not be the great choice compared to the provision of the older’s offsprings. Therefore, the equitable distribution of parental care responsibilities among young family members could lessen the burden on each person in addition to giving their parents the best things.
To conclude, I am firmly convinced that the adult should be legally responsible for their parents in terms of supporting and caring because of long-standing customs of moral norms in most countries and the practical merits from offsprings’ sincere love.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in fact, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 439.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35079726651 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79413356939 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512528473804 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 721.8 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2996716562 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.6 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2666666667 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239575321944 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925828732186 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527178897088 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175862159748 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066082865524 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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