Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this day and age, people are gradually raising their awareness of health, education and trade activities which are three main fields of a country. it is believed that the improvements of these fields are crucial for the development of a underprivileged countries but it is also the responsibility of developed nations to help them. I strongly agree with the aforementioned statement because of two reasons.
First and foremost, humans are borne to be learned, to be taken care of that are the fundamental rights of a person even their countries have enough conditions to meet the demand or not. Moreover, if people are under educate and healthy, the living standard will raise. However, they bare taxation as a resource of government to invest back society. Regarding to the trade activities, trade means exchanging goods, service such as agriculture products,banking and tourism of a nation with others. it is one of the most important activities to generate wealth of government in order to provide public service including accommodation of education and hospitals for its civilization instead of increase tax to raise revenue. therefore, these three areas are essential for certain country.
Secondly, developed countries which run surplus of economic resources often help underprivileged nations in some ways in reality to keep the balance of classes in society through international organizes. The less poor of these countries, the more peace the world is received. For example, WHO is an organize of which general objective is to provide medical service to all countries whose people need but do not have enough conditions to access such as vaccine for free. Besides, richer nations also import agriculture products and establish political relationship with poorer ones that exclude trade barrier from trade policies. therefore, not only the poorer have potential to improve themselves in this area but also the import countries can bring benefit from products which are extremely not exorbitant.
In conclusion, it is necessary for developed nations to help underprivileged nations in terms of education, health and trade which are crucial fields of each country for improving.
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- Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.To what extent do you agree or disagre 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41279069767 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03585116675 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6503080658 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.133333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314567118981 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937214746362 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723952829388 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204138864042 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421009051006 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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