With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people.
Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, with the development of technology and medical treatments, some folks insist that society should be responsible for the health care of older people. I believe that this view is true and the government should help elderly people to increase their lifespan.
When people become older, they may suffer from a wide range of diseases and health issues, increasing their time in hospitals and other health care services. In many developed countries, the authorities consider elderly people as important as young adults and they would provide the latest healthcare system for their residences. This may lead to many fundamental consequences, for example in education. Many plans for schools and developing educational facilities have been postponed or even canceled because of this demand on human life. Moreover, the pressure on living standards is increased because many older people must live in suitable areas which can have a great impact on their health.
Potential ways to handle this trend may include the following solutions. First of all, the government should enforce a plan which fulfills elderly people’s needs such as retired money policies, healthcare system. Moreover, authorities should join hands with individuals and public organizations to share the financial burden so they would balance their net spent on different categories which also play an important role in human daily life.
In conclusion, the expenses of aged people can easily be controlled by the government and it would not be burdensome for the society as they introduce many effective ways to make this work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
These days, with the development of tech...
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Suggestion:
... many effective ways to make this work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72915206155 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8599289248 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.454545455 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236490142697 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904341397426 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626015030917 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160321550081 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679250947081 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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