Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that the personal contribution to the improvements of environmental issues will not bring about as much significant effects as the authorities and big businesses. From my point of view, despite the breakthrough of national solutions for this problem, I still maintain that individuals play an essential role in protecting the environment.
To begin with, personal efforts together can reduce the amount of plastic waste as well as save natural resources in daily life activities to improve the surroundings. Firstly, it is fundamental to limit the use of plastic leading to global warming. In fact, plastic takes from 10 to 100 years to decompose completely and has a lot of harmful effects on the natural habitat. Therefore, the combination of conscious individuals will greatly diminish the amount of plastic waste in the environment. Furthermore, people can also cut the indiscriminate use of vital resources. For example, to sustain the existence of wildlife, to rationally use fossil fuels such as coal and oil to improve soil and air pollution leading to their extinction.
On the other hand, the environmental issues can be quickly handled by effective government policies and large companies. On the government side, a number of prohibitive laws as well as environmental protection policies can be enacted to raise public awareness in environmental protection. For example, in Canada, every citizen who throws garbage indiscriminately will receive a large fine and community service to clean the streets for 1 week. As a result, since the enactment of the law, the country has significantly reduced the amount of litter on the streets. On the businesses side, the application of environmental protection policies has created significant achievements affecting people's shopping habits. One other example, Big C Thang Long supermarket chain uses biodegradable bags instead of plastic bags to limit the amount of plastic waste released into the environment and it has brought unexpected effects.
In conclusion, one's efforts to improve the environment are considered insignificant, but they play an important role in a larger context. It is suggestible that the close cooperation between individuals and government as well as large enterprise can get desirable achievements in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ght unexpected effects. In conclusion, ones efforts to improve the environment are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46388888889 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27989456131 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7589354519 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.9375 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9375 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137367435245 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461450734458 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465277047152 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904023623883 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453235183745 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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