In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There have been changes in the family structure and the roles played by different family members in recent times. These changes include the reduction of family size and women taking up the role of breadwinner in the family. In my opinion, the changes have both positive and negative aspects and this essay will discuss the same.
To begin with, previously there used to be joint families with more than 10 members living together and sharing the joyous and doleful moments together. However, people nowadays tend to live separately and the family size is reduced to 3-4 people per family. Although this benefits the people to have their personal space and more financial stability, the affection and care that people get are definitely less when compared to joint families. For instance, in the past, if anyone in the family got into trouble, the whole family would support them emotionally, financially, physically. But now, everybody is busy with their own lives. Hence the changes in the family structure have as many benefits as the demerits.
In addition, women earning along with the men in the family is a great positive change that is to be observed in terms of family roles. Women have been discriminated against gender throughout history. Nevertheless, they have been fighting to dismantle the toxic patriarchal society and to win their equal rights. Fortunately, changes in the minds of people are visible nowadays and women are able to work alongside men. Therefore, I think changes in the family roles are positive.
In conclusion, recent times experienced great changes in terms of family structure and roles and I think the upsides outweigh the shortcomings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87573964497 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6962127866 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579881656805 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.488794463 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224467355949 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126416796529 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933617741478 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162922149272 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979589977817 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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