The inequality between the rich and the poor is now wider than it has ever been before. What do you think are the main causes of this difference?
In modern days, it is widely perceived that there is an escalating gap between the affluent and the impoverished. Personally, I thoroughly agree with this position.
There are two main reasons why segregation is on the rise. One of which is the lack of education. To obtain a well-paid job, acquiring an elite education is required as academic knowledge and soft skills taught in school are extensively demanded in top-notch appointments. Moreover, accumulating a more colossal knowledge than the others means that there is a rich variety of careers that can be taken into consideration.
Another noteworthy justification is the population, which has a detrimental impact on resident financial affairs. Areas of dense population appeal for an immense number of food, recreational centers, shopping malls and so forth, thereby yielding fruitful achievements in local business. Additionally, an individual's background condition and geological climate are also crucial reasons.
In sum, for the reasons mentioned above, I would contend that social stratification is significantly obvious in today’s world. To resolve this issue, the government should publish more policies to assist low-income earners and reduce the gap between the haves and have-nots.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68783068783 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22096655841 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708994708995 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4094321581 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7272727273 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0714079243111 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238200064725 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266275593117 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0403819099571 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243669181669 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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