Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?
Despite knowing the importance of biodiversity, humankind’s behaviours such as deforestation, overpopulation, pollution, etc. have made massive negative impacts leading to the extinction in various breeds and the uncompensated damages of biological diversity. The following essay will delve into the root causes of this phenomenon together with a number of possible solutions to alleviate it.
It could be conveyed the main cause for the exponential growth in the level of extinct species is the impacts on human’s life. On the one hand, the establishment and mass production happened in worldwide has increased the amount of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere, speeding up the global warming process, thus leading greenhouse effect to happen. Moreover, deforestation and overexploitation of wood, especially rain forests, for multiple purposes vary from farming activities to tourism development also play an important role in reducing animal’s natural habitat. Subsequently, some breeds are no longer have a suitable living environment, hence forces them to wander around and be attacked by hunters or natural enemies. Another example is the overuse of non-recycling materials such as nylon or plastic and the direct release of impurified wastewater to different oceans and rivers are killing sea creatures in different ways. In other words, humankind is depleting both the flora and fauna, causing biodiversity loss.
Some possible actions to tackle the mentioned problems could be: raising environmental awareness for people, limiting the usage of non-recyclable materials, developing environmentally friendly products, banning illegal tree cutting and animal preying. Moreover, the governments should also develop natural reserve centres in order to create a habitat for endangered species.
To summarize, human actions that alter the environment have a negative influence on the global ecosystem, and numerous measures should be taken to address this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86505190311 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18047481895 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695501730104 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9495204834 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.25 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114691605538 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411713614025 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453381730694 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657990557253 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328772308054 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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