The influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity.
What are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
Due to the progress of the world, going along with an ameliorating technology, our environment has suffered from a wide range of impacts, which are related to almost every flora and fauna these days. The causes are easily identified and the measures to cure those problems will be substantiated in the following essay.
Environmental degradation is affected by 2 main factors, with the contribution of humans. First and foremost, the more developed the country is, the more pollution there is in daily life. To be more specific, to keep up with economic growth all over the world, factories are required to produce various products for export and import that emit a large amount of fuel into the air, causing air pollution and also increasing the global temperature. Secondly, if the rural areas are improved, it means that more and more lands are necessary, which leads to deforestation and ecological crisis. For instance, assuming that the forest is cleared to make way for industry, causing habitat destruction and the species are no longer on the brink of extinction. Humans are the primary reason behind the threat to our nature.
To curb that issue, national and local authorities must be held accountable for seeking a solution and take steps immediately. First of all, strict laws about environmental protection should be imposed and go hand in hand with levying a tax on companies whose aims influence the natural surroundings significantly. Secondly, campaigns have to be launched in public areas so as to raise awareness about the health problems caused by pollution at present. Last but not least, children ought to be educated about environmental problems and the importance of nature as soon as possible, which can reduce the factors of climate change, greenhouse glass, and global warming.
To put everything into a nutshell, bio-degradation has become a thorny problem in recent years because of the demands of economic development. Having said that, unless individuals have a look at the solution, our society may be put under threat with serious effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...gns have to be launched in public areas so as to raise awareness about the health proble...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16913946588 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91006407331 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629080118694 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9754342596 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.428571429 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112221243341 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035889860858 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243368129649 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583658143507 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027329276283 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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