influences of online shopping to custumers and companies

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influences of online shopping to custumers and companies

In globalization era when the internet enfold throughout our life, significantly rise people can meet the ends by shopping online. There are benefits and drawbacks not only for individuals but also for companies.
There are several positive sides for customers who prefer shopping online. Firstly, one of the main benefits is the prices distinct. Thus, people prefer to make purchase on internet rather than in shopping center or markets. Secondly, as the Internet provides access to people for thousands shopping stores, they have diversity in their choices. In addition, People don’t waste their time by going to the shopping center, instead of this, having access to the world wide web they can promptly obtain what they want. Nevertheless, shopping online has also disadvantages for customer. One of the drawbacks is that despite there are overviews about items, most people couldn’t check the quality exactly. Moreover, some costumers is experienced that their purchase doesn’t arrive in time.
Online shopping also has pluses and minuses for companies as well as for customer. Firstly, by shopping online they needn't pay money for a rent, consequently they can gain profits more, thus it affects to the prices, which become lower. In the other hand companies who provide selling items on Internet, have more buying audience rather than who don't utilize selling by Internet. However having such a great competition between companies ‎negatively affects on companies. For instance Not all companies endure such a significant pressure in the global market hence In most cases they become bankrupt.
To sum up, despite online shopping has drawbacks for companies and people, it is beneficiary both companies and customers. Thus companies should try to improve this variant of shopping in order to facilitate trade.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as for, for instance, in addition, as well as, in most cases, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42307692308 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.748654306 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7605661791 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2352941176 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1764705882 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243317915463 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910874795594 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880755014229 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173778181959 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102222603422 0.056905535591 180% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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