Some people say that what children watch on television influences their behavior, while others say the amount of time children spend watching television influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Several individuals think that children’s behavior is affected by what they watch on television, while others state that youngsters' demeanor is altered by how much time they spend watching television. Both views appear to bring several different perspectives about the effect of watching TV which I will expound in the elucidate paragraph.
On the one hand, proponents of how much time children watch on tv can impact their character would be creating anti-social habits to their life. This means that they just feel comfortable when spending a lot of time watching tv rather than socializing. As seen in Japan, children tend to spend their time watching television. Furthermore, this issue can deteriorate their health both physically and mentally. This may lead children to be addicted to watching tv and make people have a couch potato lifestyle. This can be seen from Indonesia that Z generations mostly jump into the sedentary lifestyle because of over watching.
On the other hand, societies believe that children's behavior can be influenced by what they watch on tv. Firstly, many tv shows present a good tv program such as public speaking and socializing. This can create children to have a mature life in their future. For instance, in Finlandia, youngsters are able to speak fluently in front of the audience and produce a good atmosphere. Moreover, this issue can expand their knowledge from the underage. As seen from several tv programs such as National Geographic and Number Blocks. They present educational channels on television and it is very useful for children.
To sum up, it seems to me that what kids watch on tv can bring many advantages such as creating life skills from an early age and increasing their knowledge. This is provided that their parents keep supervising what their children do.
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Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13422818792 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78380330314 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2284179878 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317660247901 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111203171291 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088429973948 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202869535115 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252889328817 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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