Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth. However, some people argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people argue that financial economic and profit should be directed to innovation; however, other people believe that environmental and social problems should have the priority in order to improve the living standards of ordinary people. Both views will discuss both arguments; furthermore, my opinion.
On one hand, a proportion of people support the idea that the investment should be driven by both profit and economic growth. For instance, investing in business institutions will aim to make money and lower the purchased goods which can uplift communities. Provided that the government seek to rise the development level, more work efficancy and scale will be obtained. Hence, companies with large amounts of money have an advanced technology that can generate new industries.
One the other hand, in spite of business investigation, environmental and social prioritization should be focused at because that will decrease stress on labors and companies. For example, when governments decrease pollution and transportation issues, more factories will probably have the ability to settle and invest for longer period. Thus, companies will stay ahead of compliance and avoid potential losses. After solving those declaimers, companies will not only invest for a longer time, but they may also have political ethics toward customers which is significant to maintaining product value.
In conclusion, although opinion discussed whether the financial profit should be pumped to innovation or environmental and social situations, in my opinion, by adapting innovation that balances between profit and societal goals, businesses can be more effective for all business, government, academia, and civil society so that will be crucial in driving this direction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68939393939 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94348161571 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0025390431 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.545454545 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222099529623 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834474135326 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982686148399 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15428385682 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964546885439 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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