International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
In contemporary life, the tourist trade has received a great deal of public attraction, as whether either foreign tourism bring out positive influence or negative influence on the local citizens.in my opinion,although this trend is not without the disadvantages,the upsides will prove these
On the one hand, there are the number of obvious reasons why the local people often consider foreign traveler as a cause of serious problem in their country. Firstly, since tourist have a direct impact on traditional costume because tourist may insensitive towards the feelings of the local residents. For example, many international traveler especially those coming from developed country wear unsuitable clothes when they visit developed country, leading to undesirable influence on young people , copying provocative behaviour and fashions. Secondly, by serving for tourists, this have to required much more facilities and infrastructure of building than ever,This is mean that the animal land could be destroyed
On the other hand,it seems to me that the tourist industry is beneficial in some ways. One reason is that, by creating employment in service such as accommodation, transport,and entertainment, helping the great number of unemployed people land a job. Another reason is that, tourism attract investment from multi-national companies because the investor often spending their money on potential places. As a result, it helps to improve the standard of living
In conclusion, while travelling does have some disadvantages, it seems to me that the advantages of international visiter impact on both personality and society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65306122449 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18963771455 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661224489796 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.085269768 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.857142857 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.4285714286 7.06120827912 275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109236386999 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457266592057 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277304504618 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663922956453 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256264083525 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.03 50.2224549098 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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