International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country that they visited. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that the significant growth of the global tourist industry has brought many advantages to both travelers and the host nations. While this development could be negative to some extent, I would argue that its positive sides are greater.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why international travel has several disadvantages. In terms of tourists themselves, they might find that the prices of many goods or services in the oversea destinations are grossly inflated. Especially, those not having much experience of international travel could be overcharged for everything from a taxi or a meal. In terms of the countries where tourists visited, the booming of the tourist industry raises the problem of waste disposal and pollution which remarkably damages the environment. For example, a huge amount of plastic waste left behind by tourists has increasingly polluted the marine environment along the coastline in Vietnam.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that international travel has more advantages. One reason is that when traveling oversea, people have the chance to experience a brand-new customs and traditions, which broadens their knowledge of cultural diversity around the world. Having visited England, I could be partly alive to the spirit of the Christmas that British people celebrate. Additionally, international travel could improve local life, creating thousands of jobs for the locals who used to struggle to make ends meet. For instance, people in some traditional villages in my country can earn decent money by selling their products to foreigners
In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of international travel for both travelers and host countries are greater than the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45555555556 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98067852081 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5309109948 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301682275725 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998929971644 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887507273757 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213557564107 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110676668875 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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