International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There is little doubt that the growth of the international travel industry has exerted many positive influences on tourists as well as the host nations which receive them. Although this development still has some negative consequences, I contend that these are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, the downsides of welcoming visitors from abroad are varied. In terms of tourists themselves, travel expenses in famous tourist destinations are usually grossly inflated. They may be overcharged for everything such as meals, accommodation or even souvenirs. In addition, there are many complicated and tedious prerequisite procedures, such as visa application or plane ticket reservation. Regarding the nations that play host to international travellers, the problems of waste disposal, pollution and unregulated construction of hotels and tourist attractions often lead to the environmental degradation. Many beach resorts in Viet Nam, for example, Phu Quoc Island, have become concrete jungles of high-rise hotels and apartments to accommodate mass tourism from other countries.
On the other hand, despite such grave issues, I suppose that the merits of the growing international tourism industry would eclipse these analyzed disadvantages. Firstly, tourist operators are likely to offer numbers of holiday packages which are good value for money due to the ever-greater competition, and therefore, holiday-makers can enjoy their experience of sampling different ways of life in foreign countries and exotic cultures to the full. A typical example of this is when tourists from other countries pay a visit to Viet Nam , they would have the chance to use chopsticks and enjoy traditional meals. Secondly, the influx of foreign tourists coming to visit another country would evidently enhance tourism industries through the provision of job opportunities and services for hotels and construction industries,contributing greatly to the wealth of the host nations. Employees in these sectors generally benefit from higher salaries and the improvement in living standards.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the merits of international tourism for both travellers and host nations are more significant than the drawbacks, serious though these are.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71513353116 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23879511157 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608308605341 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7259232544 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.571428571 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6428571429 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141775678313 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457941766372 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401547121885 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100170123587 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334485739626 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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