The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
In an era of technologies, Internet has played its vital role in making the convenient sharing and collecting data, but in association with some problems that never been delivered before. This essay will discuss, firstly, some of the most alarming demerits brought by the internet, then make recommendation on the methods could be used to resolve such issues.
As can be seen, the drawbacks of the internet can be exemplified by two common belief. Initially, there is no denial that the Internet always has its vulnerability, from which the information is leaked thus raises pressing concern about the safety of both personal and enterprising materials. For example, by finding flaws in people’s logins through platform medias, thefts can easily choose the suitable time to break into personal households. Secondly, the internet negatively make complete changes to people’s lifestyle in some ways. People nowadays are inactive readers and lazy workers who will make no attempt to be creative and tend to rely extensively on the internet for every sources of information. Gradually, they lack connections to the natural work and also the practical skills long passed down by their ancestors.
Solutions to the problems require better cooperation between the Internet ‘s owners and their users. People have to be more cautious whenever using their passwords or accounts, ascertain that nobody can take advantage of the leakage of those information. Moreover, in attempt of building a more secured systems, people should avoid computer jocks by watching out to and reporting toxic pages, cheating links for instance. Another point worth mentioning is that people have to put limitations on the time spent surfing the internet and be materialized. More importantly is the task of keeping the world under exploring process as open areas are always places where you can find motivation for your accomplishments.
In conclusion, this high-tech globe can not be led without the help of internet. By using it properly, I believe that people can explore real connection and all make big saltation in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31343283582 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8505352739 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644776119403 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7408708608 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187299058508 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641069913853 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492899698551 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113095824122 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284764361448 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.