The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people say that the development of technology and the Internet has helped people gain access to an enormous source of information about the life of civils in other countries. However, I oppose that travelling is no longer necessary to acquire a complete insight of lives from different parts of the world.
Firstly, the information on the Internet can be misleading or cannot be conveyed fully to audience. Words can be affected by the subjective thoughts of writers, while pictures cannot catch all angles and videos can only record for a limited period. A typical example is that a majority of American people still think Vietnam is still at war, though Vietnam has been completely independent for over 40 years. Besides, there are features that only real experiences can interpret. No pen can describe the smell and taste of a local cuisine regardless of how skillful and aesthetic the writer is, and opinion about food varies significantly among different people.
Secondly, travel broadens the mind, and travelers gain more skills than just the knowledge of how others live. Travelling alone abroad helps people develop multiple skills, from speaking foreign languages, cooking, self-financial managing to dealing with difficult situations. Gordon Ramsay, one of the most successful and famous English chef, known for his immense knowledge of a great variety of cuisines from numerous regions in the world, experienced trickiness when he tried to make Banh cuon, a delicacy of Vietnam during his visit to this place. He even said that "Luckily I was not born in Vietnam, or I would never have been a master chef".
To conclude, the content available online is not a true reflection of the actual way of living in other nations, and in addition, one cannot comprehend it fully just by scrolling down websites. Visiting foreign countries is important to understand cultures as well as gaining one's own experiences and skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18095238095 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79724516245 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1323841617 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.538461538 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150209641376 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051412009264 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511546824153 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926016010207 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362046346686 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.