It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is a very crucial relationship, where one should be fully capable to support the person to whom he or she will be engaged with. Therefore, one should understand their capabilities to hold the relationship like marriage. Capabilities can be gained by finishing school and getting educated or by getting jobs which will help financially. While one might agree with the statement of getting married before finishing their school or getting a job, I believe, if done before finishing school or getting a job, marriage might not last forever.
When a person finishes their school they become well educated to support themselves. In this world, where education is prime important one must get educated by finishing their school so has to be a part of the present society. When a person becomes well verse in the society and the world they live in by finishing their schooling, the level of maturity increases and hence capabilities too. As a result, not only one can support themselves but can support the relationship too.
Furthermore, financial stability is much more important in the present world where one can only get by getting a job. It is an essential part of our lives, failure to which would cause instability in the relationship like marriage. As the needs and demands increase with the increase in the prices, in the relationship like marriage, it becomes a crucial point to have a job support one-selves. Therefore, getting a job is an important aspect and also increases once capability to not only support themselves but also support the relationship.
To conclude, one should finish school or get a decent job that assures not only the future but also assure stable relationship like marriage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...b, marriage might not last forever. When a person finishes their school they bec...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04912280702 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86784102725 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459649122807 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9016824807 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245058980489 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104779137568 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121557225234 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169571012866 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819155513842 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.