It is better to be unemployed in jobs rather than to be employed in jobs even if they don’t feel happy or enjoy. Do you agree or disagree?
Working hours take up a large proportion of people's time. It is suggested that people should be unemployed rather than take work they do not like. I do not agree with this view since working has other impacts on one's lives not just bring comfort to the lives of people.
Some people may argue that wage-earners spend most of their active time at work, therefore if staff do not feel satisfy with their working environment, it is better to resign. The first point in support of this viewpoint is that people have a limited lifespan and they should focus on the work they like most. The perspective is poplular among young workers, who often do not have to shoulder pressure of supporting their family or require high standards of living. An additional point is that by quitting jobs, people are able to save their time to seek jobs they like. Given more free time while being unemployed, individuals can learn the necessary skills and knowledge to match with the job requirements. Thus, it makes them qualified for the kind of job people crave for. Finally, there are numerous jobs available nowadays on the internet, people can apply for the jobs they want easily so it would be absurb to stick with boring work.
However, these thinking are flawed as they are short-sighted and having a job means people have to contribute their time and energy for the work and workplaces are not responsible for employees' hapiness. Working provides people with money and other benefits, which are fundamental for people to sustain their life by paying bills, and feeding their family. Without a job, people would struggle with financial difficulties, and may not be able to afford when unwanted events happen such as serious injuries or cancers. In addition, it is necessary for some workers to maintain consistent working time. This is especially the case for fast moving industries and professions demanding creativity such as technology and marketing. In the domains of business, constant update of newest treds is mandatory otherwise job applicants would not be valued by employers. More importantly, if people accept to be recruited in professions they do not like, they can accumulate valuable experience which gives them a distinct advantage over their counteparts. This increases their chance of getting promoted or attaining benefits from work.
In sum, quitting jobs that do not have the redeeming features that people want, may make them feel comfortable, but it would be best for people to remain in companies which help them supply for their loved ones and stay competitive in the labor market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99769053118 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6193836149 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549653579677 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4335796153 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.894736842 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7894736842 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212379568018 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768590168261 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695421546974 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148151081201 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277336603399 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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