Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whether young individuals or their fathers and mothers should be penalised for the children’s unlawful acts, is a topic of interest among people. This essay will discuss both aspects and explain why I advocate the view that juvenile delinquents should be held accountable for their wrongdoings.
One the one hand, some people argue that children are unable to distinguish right from wrong, and parents as role models thus shoulder the responsibility when their children have done wicked things. Children are immature and unaware of the consequences caused by their behaviors. Because of this, penalising them is ineffective. In contrast, individuals gave birth to the young criminals, who should have taught their sons and daughters codes of conduct should be punished instead.
On the other hand, others favor the law enforcement on young law-breakers in lieu of their parents. It is undeniable that workers are bearing heavier workload nowadays. If they do not work hard, they are placed at risk of lossing their jobs in the fiercely competitive labor market. The issue maybe worse for parental roles, as they have to provide for their families, and raise their dependants. Therefore, penalising them for their wayward children’s mistakes appears as unjustified. Another explanation why children should not shirk their responsibility of violating regulations is that punishments makes them learn necessary lessons to grow up. Imprisonment, vocational training would make young criminals regconize that any law-breaking acts will face dire consequences.
In sum, I believe that children should be punished when disobeying the law, not their parents. Even though children may not acknowledge of their unlawful acts, being in prisons or learn necessary life lesson would turn them into aldults.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50986842105 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82478082093 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5490639087 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0555555556 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406978297459 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150138501334 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171476104241 0.0667982634062 257% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301242538844 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.209704887743 0.056905535591 369% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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