It is better for boys and girls to study separately rather than study in mixed sex classes. They are less distracted and this leads to better results.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.
As the society is advancing by leaps and bounds, the people attitude adopt towards education has undergone a noticeable and far-reaching transformation. Under this circumstance, an absolute consensus is hardly reached as to whether dividing boys and girls in different classes for better academic results. For my part, I side with the opponents. In this below essay, I will try to enunciate this fact with my own perception.
Firstly, it is noteworthy that studying together will improve their social skills such as communicating, comparison better. Many studies have shown that although it is invisible, the lack of meeting the opposite gender is directly proportional to the difficult in marriage, later life. The shortage of interaction of each gender in their childhood also leads to trouble in working environment, they will face more challenge to corporate with each other. therefore, it will be a grave mistake to overlook the fact that co-education is the essential for the life preparation in future. For example, a boy who has experience of interacting with girl since his childhood is likely to understand how to behave probably with other gender. Meanwhile, a boy who has not undergone this situation will find difficult to it.
Secondly, the counter-argument raised by the objectors is that educating separately boys and girls decrease the rational of gender attracted. they probably believe that studying in the environment has the same sex makes students concentrate on their academic study more. this argument is true to some degree; however, it is incomplete, what they fail to consider is the fact that avoiding the opposite gender could not maintain forever. For example, conflicting and adversity in working life happened due to the lack of experiencing other gender that may lead to the uncomfortable to serve the boss of other sex. therefore, it is necessary that parents should send their kids to co-educational schools.
In conclusion, I am convinced that single sex education has its own advantages and detrimental effects. however, the negative effects of this education is outweigh than its positive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e negative effects of this education is outweigh than its positive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3224852071 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06012855141 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3743173919 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.823529412 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249315020459 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755849403087 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485159290881 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143637496692 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476021616878 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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