Natural resources such as oil, fresh water, forest are being consumed at alarming rate. What problems will it leads to? What can be done to solve this problem?
In many countries, the overconsuming natural resources has been a noticeable problems. Hence, it is easy to understand that people should try to analyze potential effects brought by this phenomenon and figure out the solutions. Here, in this below essay, I will try to enunciate this with my own perception.
Regarding potential influences, the consequence of this problem causes domino effects. One of its is that the running out of the natural resources will cause the global emergency in every aspects of life. For example, over-exploited those resources will trigger green house emission, soil erosion, deforestation. Furthermore, another result caused by the depletion of natural can put humans' life to extinction such as famine, which is the main reason of lacking food begun with drought. In other words, the overconsumption of natural resources is directly lead to the threatening of humans' existence.
Regarding solution, there are many remedies that can achieved effectively and easily. Probably, in agenda, lawmakers should put some strict rules to restrict the over-exploitation, enact heavy punishment for the criminal of natural depletion. Another way to solve this is that enhancing overall knowledge about natural and the cost of consuming natural resources reach the alarming rate for citizens. For example, propagandizing the boundary of exploiting and the responsibility of each person in protecting environment for students, residents will automatically make them feel like they are the one that ought to aid the environment.
In conclusion, there are many reasons lead to this problems as many remedies could be applied to fix this issue. After the discussion above, this crisis can be promisingly solved with joint efforts of numerous parties.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...natural resources has been a noticeable problems. Hence, it is easy to understand that p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 47, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...clusion, there are many reasons lead to this problems as many remedies could be appl...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4862745098 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13064008524 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2562370164 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9285714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262469590776 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817750231607 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546736414202 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148223818746 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053391947874 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...natural resources has been a noticeable problems. Hence, it is easy to understand that p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 47, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...clusion, there are many reasons lead to this problems as many remedies could be appl...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4862745098 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13064008524 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2562370164 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9285714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262469590776 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817750231607 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546736414202 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148223818746 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053391947874 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.