Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime . Many people think that having more police on streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree?
In recent years, law-breaking rates has undergone a dramatic increment. Some argue that the solely preventive measure is to enhance the police workforce on the streets. In my opinion, I do not concur with this statement.
There are several reasons as a result of crime infringement. Firstly, people have difficulty in overwhelming financial burden. They are coerced to turn into a offender as a last resort to earn a living for their livelihood. Secondly, the overexposure to the violent programmes is among the root reasons. In the proliferation of technology, approachability to the media outlets such as Youtube, Facebook,..may obviously go viral. Apart from the educational programmes, the uncensored displays associated with the agressiveness such as bloodshed, conjugal violence,... would be broadcasted rampantly. As a result, the excessive involvement without any restrictions could exert detrimental impact on physical and psychological sides,which provoke them to commit crimes.
There are a variety of feasibly crime-busting solutions. Firstly, the authorities should launch the campaign to heighten citizens' consciouness about the repercussions of perperation. Because of the fact that people have faced up to many on-going pressures of day-to-day lives so they fail to catch up the latest news. Those campaigns should be propagated throughout media platforms by combing with entertainment amenities For example, it is advisable for the educational agency to add the offense content into the teaching curriculum to eschew the juvenile delinquency. Secondly, free-of-charge policy may be implemented to the financially disadvantaged to avoid going astray into the crime. For example, the provisions about special treatment such as food, rice,... could be applied to assist them a better life. Many of whom may concentrate on seeking for a line of work effortlessly.
To sum up, crime cases have been permeated in the civil society due mainly to aforementioned reasons. Except for police, a range of methods should be applied to prevent posing criminal threat to human
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60952380952 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33436718661 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5783375105 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1428571429 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132061980192 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362855104391 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374187327995 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794955213086 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211095502397 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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