Some people find advertisements amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this when they shop. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In the fast-paced digital world, the vast majority of advertisements are published for their business. Some people take a view that the amusement or annoyance from aids have no adverse impact on their shopping. As far as I am concerned, I do not concur with this statement.
Firstly, allocating more funds on the positive commercials encourages individuals have a range choice for their shopping. It seems to have many types of product for the lowest to the highest levels creating the diversity for buyers. To illustrate, the various assortment for smartphones such as Apple, Samsung, Oppo,... The financially- advantaged have faculties to purchase the product on the expensive price having the long- term usage and endurance like the Apple with the exorbitant costs. In term of the have-nots, they are able to purchase Samsung or Oppo with the aim to call or chat with the others.
Secondly, the impetus of providing detrimental commercials promotes individuals to have unwholesome knowledge to this product.
Moreover, with the aid of cutting-edge technology, providing the substantial amount of entertaining advertising on the social media which is more effortless provokes the discomfort and obsess while going shopping. The huge selection for each goods run a higher risk of being the roof reason promoting consumers have hesitance for their need.
To sum up, the promotion for advert in the market have definite pros and instinct cons to the feelings of the customers. From my point of view, publishing the ads which falls right into the consumers' emotion would prefer to foster.
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...hing the ads which falls right into the consumers emotion would prefer to foster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23921568627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90906919533 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.948352169 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744435975647 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292048785085 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413151623431 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457797715803 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557422216708 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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