It is better for students at university to live far away from home than to live at home with their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, whether university pupils should live on their own or with their family is a topic of concern. In my opinion, I still believe that having a life out of their home brings much more benefits to the students themselves.
To commence with, living out without their parents will help cultivate the students’ independence abilities, which will be useful for their later life. When they move out to live alone, they have to fend for themselves . Therefore, they will be gradually accustomed to doing household chores skills such as cooking and doing the washing up and problem solving skill when something unpredictably happens. Moreover, they may learn to manage their own budget properly because they are aware that they cannot turn to their parents whenever they run out of money. As a result, they will have to find a job to earn a living, which makes them treasure the value of money and thus, forcing them to spend their money properly.
Moreover, living away from parents provides students with a more free and private life. It is because they can live out of their parents’ control and protection, which sometimes restricts them from doing their wants. When moving out to live on their own, they are able to do what they always dream of, to take responsibility of their life and to make daily decisions without being intervened in by parents’ opposing ideas. For example, when living their own life, a student can throw an overnight party with her friends without any complaints from her parents, and she can even buy anything with her own money without asking for their permissions.
To conclude, I strongly believe that living a self-control life will turn these students into more versatile and independent people which will help them in the future, and at the same time, give them a sense of privacy and freedom.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89743589744 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50145666919 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554487179487 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3137379075 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274376942717 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1206027419 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697379895993 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170974230418 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732837493061 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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