It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is commonly assumed that a few people are born with unique talents such as good sportsmen or great musicians. Conversely, other individuals cling to that children will become great and as compensation for their lack of talent if they have enough experience, determination, and hard work. From my perspective, I would argue that if children want to be good at some aspect, they will need both talents and training.
On the one hand, a number of people believe that without "God's gift", a person could compensate for their lack of talent. To begin with, by virtue of the fact that working hard is one of the most necessary things in order to become a good player. When children play an outdoor game frequently, they can possibly achieve many unique experiences and knowledge, which could only be detected and developed while training. For instance, my brother, who is born with no talent for badminton, has become the best badminton player in my province thanks to his hard-working, he even surpasses outstandingly those children who are born with badminton talents.
On the other hand, others claim that talent is a gift and cannot be compensated by anything else. Firstly, carrying extraordinary and unique genes which encourage children to be brilliant is a very convenient fact for them. When a child contains exclusive genes in their DNA sequence, they can carry natural skills which cannot be taught. For example, researchers have shown that Messi, being the most prevalent and brilliant footballer in the world, contains special genes in his chromosomes in order for him to develop himself.
In conclusion, despite some children could have special genes giving them a unique talent, to become great in that aspect, they also have to train frequently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, firstly, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08934707904 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77360251152 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563573883162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6537588503 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.416666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265367666184 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100144925778 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304565810534 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153818931611 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569396928192 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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